nice family moments( the best christmas I ever had was when the tree fell on top of my dad)

Aw, I liked it. :) It was nice and sweet. I like how you capture Jack as a dad. You do it in a way that doesn't seem OOC even though Jack doesn't really act like a family man normally. :P

Nice writing!

Wow, you know what, I genuinely enjoyed that. So incredibly sweet. Wonderful job!

-Bell

that was prety good it was kinda funny btw thanks for your reveiw on my story wiled waters please reweiw the many adventures of julie don't please don't think its weird its just if jack had a sister thats how i would picture her me and some friends made her up years ago and she kinda stuck thanks again

- Julie Christine Sparrow

AW! Their first Christmas! How sweet!