Geez I forgot how good some fanfics are. -_-; I hate FF.Net
This story is awesome. I really like the way you portrayed Cloud and his reasoning behind his acts. The story makes him very, well, human.
My favorite has to be Vincent's undoing. Call me morbid, but that really is just awesome. o_O I need to read more of your stories...

Definatly intresting..

It was indeed different! And rather tragic/angstiness at that, but presented in a calm light that made it good. I found only 2 errors, which is nothing at all, really...You used 'idle' instead of 'idol' once, something that isn't major but detracts from the flow. The resemblance makes that quite an easy error. The other was a minor misspelling that spell-check might not even have caught, and everyone does that sometimes. All in all, this was a very nice fic! Congratulations.

SolarCloud

Very, very sad. A wonderful fic indeed. Now I need inspiration to write my own stories. Great job, keep it up.CT

Tifa, thats two of your stories i read and liked. I haven't reviewed the fanatic yet, but i had to review this on. Love the perspective, love the thought you put on this. -KeokiFirebird

Holy shit, Tifa G. Holy shit. That's about the only coherent thing I can think of to say. I'm at a real loss for words right now. This story was incredible, amazing, . I honestly wasn't expecting all the deaths, and the subtly phrased explanations and such. Woah. And Vincent... well... let's just say I'll be easing up on the glomping for a while. Holy shit. I really loved this twisted and dark tale, Cloud telling it was just the perfect touch. Wow... I'm still in shock.

Remarkably poignant. I love how there is no sense of self-pity, how he just states the facts as they are, and leaves it to the reader to assess his pain.

hey, guess what? this story is awesome. & therefore so are you.

whoa...that was very well written even with a few mistakes, we all make them. it was quite depressing though. anyway keep up the good work, you'll go far _

Why haven't I read this? Ack, it's soooo good. Sad, but actually pretty.. likely. I could see this as happening, despite how depressing it is! GOOD! Yay!

I really liked this one, its so sad and so very touching. I could read it over and over again and not get tired of it.

oh...that was so sad...poor Cloud-sama...it seems naniki was the only happy one...but still it was a nice change! A nice and well written fic!

Wow! This is a very insightful piece, with the most ironic endings for everyone. Endings that, if I thought about it, could expect and agree and relate with. It surprises me that, even though this fic is twisted, eveyone in this fic is in character. I especially was surpised w/ Tifa killing herself over Aeris, and I really felt the part where Vincent shreds his face. (Sounds sick there doesn't it? ) I loved it!

Wow... Very well-written and dark imagery. Such a wonderful change from the usual trash on this site. I love this story, and for that matter, all of your works. Highly innovative and original, you are wuite the creative authoress. My only advice is to run a spell/grammar check, but it's nothing big. PLEASE keep writing these, as they are so inspiring. DARK STUFF FOREVER!

slapping reality. you are brutal, the words have moved me and this story has not left me weepy, but very bitter and wretched. excellent, tifa g.