Oh my! This is... My heck! It's...I can't put it into words! It seems to be the mind of a mad person! Brittany remembering blood by the color of the room. I think the rating is alright. It's not too disturbing, but still very scary. The suicide part was kinda gross though... That part i didn't like. But that would trigger something in a mind, and flip it to madness in a light degree... Sorry, i'm kinda rambling. Anyway, very chilling, and there's a lot of angst. I wouldn't say enjoyable... but definitely worth a read.

I agree with Pariosha! Dark and suspenseful!

WOW... is all the words that came after I read this... It's dark, sad, tragic... but amazing... WOW... Awesome story...

Wow...sad, but...AMAZING!

i hope you like the poem i wrote in honor of this story i called it his color i wrote it and then i read this story and thought hey they have basically the same plot so i posted it...

love this story! keep writing LYL.

-Hannah!

wow... i'm all for angst and drama... so cute and sad... loved it... _

Ooh that was very dark.

I love AxB but I still can't picture Alvin doing all that.

Brittany's part was written very well tho!

WOW that was dark. that was great. suspenseful. sad, amazing,this actually gave me chills.

Oh my wow. That was...wow. Brittany really does need some help. And Alvin should've gotten some help. Man. That was something. But I loved it. That was great. Great job on your first time doing this.

Wow... This story-consistent with your other works-is very well written.. and so damned sad. :\

I could totally see Brittany reacting this way, especially being a first hand witness.