XD

Oh my God, that was so hilarious... Poor Cloud...

Oooowww! Poor Cloud!

"Shoo" FTW! xDD

Cloud is going to kill Zack, but I'm going to hug him.

Poor Cloud

LOL, 'shoo'

oh wow wow wowie wow

poor cloud XD damn sephyz hot and he dnt giv a shit that hes butt nakkid asnwering the door

-tries to stop nosebleed-

.. man i would love to read more i wana see wat cloud does to zack xD

I like it, but im a little disappointed. But very nice. and funny

Awesome. Full of awesome.

Oh I wish, I wish... well, wherever you got the idea, I'm just thankful that you did get it. XD

oh jeez. Funny, I can see Seph as the type to go about in the nude and not give a damn about what any body else thought.

LOL. I actually giggled.

I love your work. ]

WhiteNoseHound

"Hungdng..." that's the best line i've read from CLoud in any fanfiction hahaha and "Shoo" by Seph

That was great, I loved the ending!

Ahaha, LOL. ...What the heck, Sephiroth, really. XDD

Ah, that was great. :'D

I loved how totally random that whole thing was. Seph really didn't have a problem with being naked, huh? Wow.

Cloud was a cutie. 3

One thing I suggest, though: Try reading over your stuff to check for spelling errors. Two things I noticed were:

"It felt like a dream when the tall man leaned over his kitchen table to sign the reports, some sort of highly erotic phantasy, as Cloud’s mind kept throwing up mental images of having *that* lean over *him* instead of the Gaia forsaken documents, that cool face never showing any emotion, that sculptured body doing all the talking for him…."

"Phantasy" should be "fantasy." :P that one made me laugh. XD

"Sculptured," while technically a word (and apparently the name of some heavy metal band?) is used wrong here. I'm almost positive you meant to say 'sculpted.'

Check your fic for stuff like that, and you'll be all set! _

Nice job, I really liked it :D :D

Tobi

Bwahahahahahahah

That was pure evil! Sephiroth answering the door naked!

That would be quite a site!

"Shoo"

Poor Cloud

HAHAHA I SO want to be Cloud, wiping drool off of my chin. hehehe