Great story. I love that Share wasn't a goauld. It would be great to read a fic with Jack and Kawalski 's new teams. And would love to see the Dan /Share aspect of this AU. Love the Sam /Jack aspect, it was a great rewrite.

How have I missed this wonderful story? Fantastically told. Now. Go rewrite the next 199 episodes!

*taps foot*

Well?

I really envoyed this story. A lot!

You did a great job with the characters and their relationships (I especialy like what you wrote about Sam & Daniel's) and I enjoyed the way they all met w

Thanks a lot for sharing this! (And thanks a lot for keeping Kawalski alive! 8D)

you show A lot of promise. Keep up the good work.

This has to be one of the best pre-series stories I've ever read. I love it! Awesome job with the writing. I hope that you might continue on and make excerpts from episodes with this new dynamic. Even if you don't, awesome work.

Lovely story. Well characterised interactions between Jack and Sam and the choices they would have had to make in this circumstance. Very enjoyable and a happy ending :)

A wonderful and fascinating story. The characters felt absolutely right and it was very well written. Will there be a sequel? I would really like to know what would happen next.

At times I almost cried (like when Hammond levvied the order) and at the end I smiled wide. Excellent job. Really. Brava.

breath in...aaand...happy sigh.

Thank you. Lovely to read some decent SG again.

Really beautiful!

Great AU version of the original. Nice how the story even

came full circle and ended at the car park scene where it basically all began.

Thank you again for a great read!

Brilliant, as always Annerb. Yours are the only AU SG 1fics I'll ever read coz only you can pull them off.

I was very pleased and relieved that you had Teal'c joining Sam's team. Though I would have liked to have seen a little scene with T visiting her in the infirmary.

Thanks for seeing this through :)

God! This was sssso much better than the original story. You kept Jack and Sam together, Kawalsky alive, Sha're safe, and even Ferretti was less injured, but the plot was just as exciting. Loved how Teal'c was won over by Sam's mettle and not just Jack's. Truly, really enjoyed this immensely.

What an absolute pleasure to read. I love pre-series fics, and this is among the very best. Your characterizations, the way you convey their thoughts and emotions in such an understated way... just perfect. So glad that you decided to expand on the first few chapters to make it into a full-blooded story.

Wonderful - thank you so much for adding to the original two chapters. This was a delight to read and I'm sure no words can describe how happy I am that you continue to write excellent Sam/Jack fics. Thank you!

Great story. Thanks :)