Great.

It has a good premise, however their are a few things that keep it from being a truly excellent read. The first is that it is a little OOC, Harry is portrayed as being rather weak in a fight that looks like something that would have happened in school with Malfoy. The other thing is the exclamation marks at the end of every sentence during the fight sequence, that is a no no. Other than that I have enjoyed reading this fic.

Well, let's see... 1)Natalie constantly going to the bathroom; after reading stuff like mysteries for a while, you start to take notice of the really small details 2)Polyjuice Potion; Yea, that kinda just proves number 1...

Now, The head auror dude, McNeil, seems kinda suspicious to me...could just be that I'm paranoid, who knows...

Anyways, great fic, keep going...

Great ending!

This story should definitely have more reviews!

Great story!

Brillant Story! Hope you make a sequel.

that was wonderful, and mind you I'm not really too keen on action fics...so consider youself very flattered ;):):):

Yeah! That was a great fic! I really loved it!

It had a predictable plot, but a GREAT story anyway. I love the idea of harry being an unspeakable.

*sniff* Woohoo!

I can imagine Harry as one of those FBI style agents walking around with an expressionless face. :D

Yet again another AWESOME story by the great writer E.C.R. Potter. Can't say anything else.

HazelMist

awwah thats so cute! MAke a sequel plz!

awwah thats so cute! MAke a sequel plz!

WOW! This was really good! I never expected Natalie and Mcneil, but then again I'm no good at mysteries! I really enjoyed this story! I want to read all your work, but I got stupid homework to do. I hate it when I get homework over the weekend! Well I really liked this story, but I liked the Lion one better, but then again I haven't read your other stories yet. I'll have to read them soon!