E'gad why have you stopped this story! Please do continue with it!

This is very beautifully crafted. I really like how you put little romantic tidbits for Max and Leo. Well done. :)

Finally I read this one! Plz continue on!

This is pretty good so far. I'm a sucker for all Max/Leo stuff, and you present it quite well. But poor Leo. (

The only thing I had a problem with was that I thought they ended the argument between them a bit too quickly. It seemed much too abrupt.

I like your writing style, though, and would like to see more!