 Rose1948 9/27/07 . chapter 1This definitely has potential. Please continue. Thanks for sharing. |
 Vivi 10/22/02 . chapter 1 Interesting. Hope you write more. |
 Ghost in the Machine 1/21/02 . chapter 1What Ranma needs to realize is that what women say they want, isn't what they really want. Akane says she wants to fight Ranma 'for real'. What she really wants is to hit Ranma. If Ranma fought her 'for real' she'd be down in seconds. Akane knows this, even if she won't admit it to herself.
Ranma has made his choice to grow up. But unless Akane is willing to do so as well, Ranma is in for a world of dissappointment. |
 Cory D. Rose 1/21/02 . chapter 1 Gasp, crumple, thump! I give this one two toes up!
Reviewer falls over in a dead faint from finding an in character fic that is good too! His feet wobble back and forth and point at the ceilng. _ |
 Aquila avolare 1/21/02 . chapter 1Very nice! Akane and Ranma seemed very in-character. Continue please! |
 Fusion Blaster 1/21/02 . chapter 1Well it's got potential... I hope to see more soon. |
 D-Chan3 1/21/02 . chapter 1ohhhh! Way to go-Ranma's training Akane! Yay! But he really should tell her that he's trying to train her or she's bound to get seriously angry! Ranma and Akane matchups are my favorite-keep going please! |