I love reading the way you write! it's tons of fun to read :D

You know what I'd love you to write? One from Kurt or Kitty's point of view, I think you'd be able to get one just right :)

Well done Bowles. (You're name reminds me of bowels by the way. Is it supposed to?) It's been some time since I've been on this site and randomly this weekend I decided it was time for some good writing about the x-men and yours by far is the best writing I've read today. It's nice to have some characterization and relatability in a story. You're not heavy on plot or Lancitty and it makes the story all the better for it. I think the relatability of Lance is what surprised me the most. This is Lance. From the Brotherhood. We're not supposed to relate with him. But then he drinks his slushie like I do to get the most out of my money and he talks about his home being a disease and all of a sudden I hate the x-men too. My favorite? That line about all the people above me and below me. Spot on. I look forward to reading more of your writing. Good luck. Dixon

Phwoar - always great to tune in and see another Lance story from Bowles! Especially his annoying singing at the end there. Loved reading it, as always! :)

Great portrayal of Lance. He's a character you obviously studied, so you wrote him really well. There's a bittersweet kind of theme to it, really. :) It's realistic in the sense that Lance always seemed like a guy who didn't know what side to be on when it came to teams, and I bet that he also didn't know which path to take in life either.

BTW, this has been bugging me for awhile, where did the "Lance watches Friends" thing originate? I've seen it in like, six fanfictions. :P

AH VERY GOOD STORY!