WOW. What a powerfully beautiful story you have written! It kept me enraptured the whole time...it was funny, but meaningful as well. I loved it very much; thank you for writing it!

I thought it was very good. A lot of detail made this story stand out. Plus, I love the T.S. Eliot reference!

This...This is great. Normally, I'm not a fan of extraneous detail, because I often feel that it slows things down too much, but in this case I enjoyed reading through all the details. It makes me want to start adding more detail to my own stories. Which sucks, because I'm not so great at that. :(

Aw! Very sweet, very funny and very much in character.

WHOA!. Amazing just amazing. so much emotion. An award winning story. you are an amazing author. keep up the good work.may your work bring you hapyness to all.

I would say they have come to terms, at least for this new plateau for them. Very nicely, well developed peice here that you have written. This one does seem to have captured the feel of both the manga and the series, allowing for some character growth, but also remaining true to the fundamentals of both Roger and Dorothy. I would love to recommend that you consider doing more related work along this vien in the future. You seem to be able to capture these two very well.