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Reviews for: Allegro Allergies
Katamabob 5/2/11 . chapter 1
I liked it ;) I love this pairing. I'm not sure why. It might just be because I feel sorry for Misa, and I feel sorry for L, because neither of them really found love. Also, Light doesn't like Misa, at all. And he killed L. So, yeah. They really just both need to get away from Light xD

Kate
Markus Ramikin 1/21/11 . chapter 1
"(Don't worry, he's not.)"

It's better to write without inserting blatant author-to-reader comments like that. It lifts the reader out of the story, which is bad.
have-a-cookie 4/28/10 . chapter 1
"Light Yagami later goes home and uncharacteristically kills criminals until he is in a drunken stupor, wondering how in the hell his greatest rival was able to steal his fake girlfriend in only one night."

XD

Best line ever. Seriously.

This was nicely written. I liked it a lot :D
aiushtha 12/22/09 . chapter 1
xD Nice drabble. I found it quite amusing.
Ariana Elise 12/21/09 . chapter 1
Very cute (faves)
Browneyedmami 12/19/09 . chapter 1
Already reviewed @ LJ, but had to again here! I absolutely love this and can't thank you enough for it! *glomps*
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