"What else do you call a person who blows up a castle by herself?"

I call them a SCIENTIST! With a match.

Ed's not gonna be happy about this one. Poor guy.

I feel like a "DUN DUN DUN" is called for here.

this is thebestestfriendsforever just moved to a different account. good story.

That was so sweet! I really loved reading about Edmund and her's son. :) He was cool. The family interaction was great! I can't wait to read the last part. I'm so glad its already been posted.

next one sounds good.

great ending to a great story.

yeah great chapter.

this was such a great story, i really loved how you ended it. i love her hope, it is wonderful. great job.

Such a sweet ending even if it wasn't the one I was hoping for :) Eagerly awaiting the next story!

OH NO!

I MISSED IT!

I'm SO sorry about not reviewing the last few chapters! I was not feeling well, and I had a bunch of work and...blahblahblah.

Great work on this story I can't wait for Ever After!

Good Luck :)

Bittersweet ending, and I love the way you are able to capture the feelings of Holly.

Great chapter and I can't wait to see the final finale,

Ever After. Fantastic work!

You really have improved in your writing, and I loved your plot line for this story, very creative and inventive.

You left me hoping for more, and I am sure you will deliver.

Awesome fic!

SO AMAZING! please continue with the series!

Aw...

You have such a wonderful bittersweet quality to your writing. This chapter was so dear and wonderful. I was verging on tears.

Wow! Well done.

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

Xanthaie,

What a great chapter! I enjoyed the conversation between Will and Edmund.

The sweet scene at the end with Holly at the piano was very well written. Terrific imagery. Edmund watching her play and the sweet conversations were wonderful.

I really loved this chapter. You capture the family element beautifully.