  nancy 2/11/12 . chapter 2 Im crying |
 TrunksLover10101 2/7/11 . chapter 10moooooooooooore! thos is so good! so mooooooooooooore! - |
| Mercedes Wolfcry 7/12/09 . chapter 10 OMG! W ANT TO READ MORE.! |
| RikusgirlRica 8/16/06 . chapter 10 Very good, continue writing. If it is possible make it a little longer, though. |
| xXEndlessImaginationXx 6/6/06 . chapter 10 great story update soon |
| soccergal2k2 11/24/02 . chapter 8 dance of a little white feather is an amazing story, hope it stayes that way, few spelling and sentence structure errors, but good enough. peace goodbye |
| EEK 9/25/02 . chapter 10 *eyes fill with tears* NOT GOKU! COME BACK! *eyes light up with inspiration* Whack 'em over the head again! Then GOKU WILL BE BACK! |
| EEK 9/25/02 . chapter 9 GOKU'S GONE INSANE! INSANE I TELL YOU! I mean, with my friends, if I don't recognize insanity when I see it, who in all of Snake Way and HFIL can? |
| EEK 9/25/02 . chapter 8 Awww! IT'S SOOOOOOOOO KAWAII! |
| EEK 9/25/02 . chapter 7 GOKU in a SUIT? Ooooooooooooookay.
*snickers* Ooooo, I what's gonna happen! *bursts into hysterical laughter* |
| EEK 9/25/02 . chapter 6 O.O Whoaaaaa... |
| EEK 9/25/02 . chapter 5 Whoa! I DON'T WANT EVERYBODY TO DIE! *sob* None's gonna die...are they? |
| EEK 9/25/02 . chapter 3 *curiously* Is that Gohan? That's my guess! |
| EEK 9/24/02 . chapter 2 Chibis are sooooooooooooooooooooooo cute! |
| EEK 9/24/02 . chapter 1 *eyes fill with tears* That's sooooo kawaii! |
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