|Reviews for Apprentice the first|
| Crimson Pheonix 7/31/12 . chapter 3
Ninja wrangling... Lol!
| Eerie Iri 3/26/11 . chapter 3
Yes, I know. My reviews are hardly original. But does the quantity make up for the quality in this case?
| Eerie Iri 3/26/11 . chapter 2
Awesome. I loved the bit with the squirrel. XD
| Eerie Iri 3/26/11 . chapter 1
| Mistflyer1102 10/18/10 . chapter 3
Hi. Wanted to let you know that I absolutely LOVE your stories where the ninjas drive the medics crazy.
Keep up the awesome work! :D
| CappuccettoRosso 5/1/10 . chapter 3
I think...no, I know, you've ruined ninjas for me. *laughs* Or at least, you've ruined the G.I. Joe ninjas for me. Now every time I read another G.I. Joe fanfic, and they just so happened to mention either Snake Eyes or his apprentices, I catch myself comparing the other author's interpretation with yours. I still can't decide if that is a good thing, or not. *shrugs* In any case, brownie points for the interaction between Kamakura and the other characters, especially his fellow nin. Your writing is so smooth and fluid, I practically slid through the chapters and came to a comfortable stop. Props! Thank you for sharing
| zenbon zakura 1/8/10 . chapter 3
hehehe she might also get to add counter intel ninja wrangling agent to her title lol
| slapshot22 1/7/10 . chapter 3
This was a great little fic! I really like the interactions of the ninja with the other Joes. I loved how proud he was being compared to Snake Eyes, and that he loved chocolate chip cookies, like I do! M! :)
| Totenkinder Madchen 1/7/10 . chapter 3
Oh, Kamakura. Marvelous!
I have to say, I really like the way you depicted Scarlett's position within the ninja group. If Snake-Eyes as master is almost paternal, then Scarlett is maternal, and as a result there's some wonderful interaction with the apprentices. :D I can see her being concerned-especially after what happened to Ophelia-and as a result, her ninja-wrangling is doubtless second to none. She could probably round up a whole herd of 'em . . .
Hm. What's the plural of ninja? A herd? A flock? A sneak?
And does the title "Apprentice the first" mean we get to see more? I hope so-I'm personally waiting for Jinx to fall under Doc's tender mercies.
| general zargon 1/7/10 . chapter 3
LOL! I love how Kamakura took being called as bad as Snake a compliment! I can really picture him doing that. _ Hm, chocolate chip cookies! Anyway, I love this story and I hope you post the next of the apprentice stories soon! I wonder which apprentice is next? Keep up the excellent work! :)
| zenbon zakura 1/5/10 . chapter 2
hahahahahahahahah lol cute squirrel! hurry update!
| Loki21 1/5/10 . chapter 2
AH! Too funny! Not only funny, well written too! I love the interaction between the apprentices and the sensi. Thanks for the fic, and I'll wait for more :)
| Faye Kinitt 1/4/10 . chapter 2
great chapter. what ever happened to tiger claw ? was he the one who started the free dojo for inner city kids?
i really like the banter and felt sorry for Doc, he will loose whats left of his hair stressing about them, when will he realise its pointless.
i really liked the comments about scarlett. i always wondered about her relationship with the apprentices , she got on well with jinx but you didnt see much interation with her and the others , and they always came to the cabin with her and snake eyes which to me just seemed a bit awkward.
cant wait for the next installment
| general zargon 1/4/10 . chapter 2
Yay! I love how Jinx and Tiger Claw knew about the secret passages before Kamakura, and I can really see the ninjas pretending to be squirrels when Doc showed up. :) I can't wait to see how Kamakura will get herded back to the infirmary! I wonder if the tea trap will work on him? Hm...
Anyway, another great chapter, please keep up the great work and update soon! _
| Frog1 1/4/10 . chapter 2
(Laughter) Doc and Lifeline truly need a ninja-free vacation!