How completely creative! The similarities that mirror Romeo and Juliet yet go in a completely different direction. The use of the Guardians Forces was brilliant, and very enjoyable… along with picturing Squall using a Shakespearean vocabulary at times… One of the most imaginative, well-written stories I've read in a long time, plus it had Squall and Rinoa in it. Remarkable.

Me like. Write more. Me confused, but I get confused form about everything. :)

Nice job. I rather like the way you used GFs as human-like entities to aid and serve their masters/mistresses. I really like the way you set up the conspiracy like that, not bad at all. I'm anxious for the next chapter!

Romeo & Juliette in a FF8 faerytale? Quite original, as is the usage of GFs in this story.