| Reviews for What He Always Wanted |
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thethreebroomsticks69 7/15/12 . chapter 1So sweeeet. And so true. So, very, very true. I love it. And it reads really well :) |
Dragongirl Jun 5/15/10 . chapter 1err, dunno if anyone has commented on it yet - you write Neal's name as 'Neil'... which is so off that I don't know if I should cry or laugh. Could you fix it? (okay... not THAT off - but still - its nauseating in a way when I know how its correctly spelled...) |
JeanneZ84 3/21/10 . chapter 1Great job on this story. JeanneZ84 |
Ursula4x 1/14/10 . chapter 1I like the way this story unfolds and Moz's insightfulness into Neal's character. |
MirrorFlower and DarkWind 12/22/09 . chapter 1lol nice i just loved it lol great job |
Maira the Panda 12/19/09 . chapter 1Neal. Neal with an A. NeAl. NeAl. Also, I doubt Mozzie can climb roofs nowadays. Other than that, not bad! |