|Reviews for Skid Row As A Metaphor|
| PhantomBialystock 2/16/10 . chapter 1
Interesting poem. I guess we all relate to the Little Shop characters in some way; wanting to break away from our old lives and find something new and exciting. I like the concept of it. )
I would suggest making a more even rhyme scheme, and maybe better rhymes in some places. Some of them seem predictable, but I really shouldn't be talking since I'm not that great at it either.
And one line that kind of bugged me:
*(i wouldd make reference to Godspell here but let's just stick to one musical )*
I think you should omit this line. It steers the focus away. But if you decide to keep, there is a typo in it. Would has only one d. )
Besides these few things, I thought this was a nice poem overall.
| HermioneLennon 1/22/10 . chapter 1
Very inspirational...And yes, alluding to Godspell would have been nice...I enjoyed it! :)
| S. Snowflake 12/20/09 . chapter 1
I used to think of where I lived like my personal Skid Row, since I wanted to get out, then me, my mom, and my sister were forced to, so here I am! I actually like being poor more than living in that hell.
Nice poem! And I wouldn't mind another musical reference.