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   Clifjumpersfangirl 12/21/09 . chapter 2wow just wow I do feel sorry for any one who comes after her. keep up the great work i can't wait to read more :D |
| LunaeShark 12/21/09 . chapter 2 Oh, gods, Elita, are you crazy? Better to say you want time off than act this way and worry Prime so much. Not to mention that there are probably Decepticons after you and they won't care that you're on vacation. *face/palm* What a mess. |
| Phoenix13 12/21/09 . chapter 2 Sneaky femme! Nice choice for a car, Lita. I love Lexus'. You're going a slightly different route to the ending I think you're going for (am I making sense?), but I'm hedging my bets on this one. Go Elita! There's nothing more satisfying than having some indulgent time to yourself, and feeling safe knowing that one huge hunky mech will track you down... eventually. ;-) |
| Phoenix13 12/21/09 . chapter 1 OMG... messing with Optimus is trouble, but messing with Elita is even MORE trouble. I think I can see where this is heading, and the final result. ;-) As always, good on Magnus for being the sane upstanding citizen that he is. ::pat, pat:: I'm glad you're branching out into new fics, m'dear. Lovely! |
| Anodythe 12/20/09 . chapter 2 Sneaky femme! Hope she enjoys the snow. It would be interesting to know just why RA was in command and not Elita. |
| Botosphere 12/20/09 . chapter 2 WOW! I never saw that coming - human infiltrators working for Decepticons. Makes sense, but I wouldn't expect the 'cons to stoop so low. ;) *giggle* A make-over for Elita! She's in stealth mode without even trying (or maybe it's one of those "I make this look good" kind of things)! Regardless, can't wait for the next chapter! Eowyn77 |
| Second daughter of Eve 12/20/09 . chapter 1 *Face palm* Red Alert, you're an aft. There, I've said my side. lol. Eve |
| Anodythe 12/20/09 . chapter 1 Ah Red...sin first and repent at leisure? Just what was Elita doing and can they even get the humans to talk? Either way Red Alert is in for one dressing down. |
| Botosphere 12/20/09 . chapter 1 LOL OH WOW! Ticked-off Prime is AWESOME! :D I loved Elita outwitting both Red Alert and Ultra Magnus. Tantruming!Elita is just plain sweet. I can't WAIT to see where you take this! Keep writing whatever your muse gives you - it's ALL awesome! :D Eowyn77 |
| RaniPuma 12/20/09 . chapter 1 Oh boy Someone is in trouble with Optimus Can't wait for the next chapter |
| Phantom1s 12/20/09 . chapter 1 Oh this is going to be good. Elita is pissed, Prime is really pissed, and Magnus is going to ge this ass kicked for this. Because he should have stopped Elita form leaving. |
| Clifjumpersfangirl 12/20/09 . chapter 1 wow another great story i can't wait to see how this one plays out. :D keep up the good work :D |
