cool story, i do hope that you continue with it!

hey

like the story so far please keep updating

cullengal101

I saw that you asked in chapter 4 if you should rewrite this story, and i think not, i like it a lot the way it is now. so keep going don't stop. hugs!

Ron's job is actually pretty interesting. XD

I've really enjoyed reading this so far, I've found it interesting that the background pairings are not set in stone which is something that I don't often see. I'm slightly curious about the other Potter siblings and the circumstances around Harry's disappearance/adoption. I look forward to reading more, hopefully soon.

so nice

I like it

I'm enjoying this story so far. I look forward to further chapters, or the rewrite if that is what you end up doing.

Very nice chapter. Percy with Blaise, not a pairing I have seen before. I also love Ron's idea at the end for the primary school.

Nice story!

A couple of picky things though. English kids wouldn't talk about 'high school', they would say 'secondry school'. Also,nobody would refer to Britain as an 'island'. It may seem small enough to be called that, but they wouldn't, trust me!

Thanks for writing about such a cool idea though!

interesting can't wait for the next chapter

This is one interesting story and has me craving for more. I like the air of mystery as to why the potters abandon Harry and don't realize that he's been right in front of them this whole time. I wonder if the truth will come out as to why he was given up and what will happen when both Harry & Tyler find out they are really brothers? This should be very interesting. Keep em coming.

Oh that's awesome! :D

Great. Update soon.

this is really really really good! please please please update soon!

I like it.