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Joe 'Po' Navark 1/2/10 . chapter 12
BEST! ENDING! EVER! I absolutely loved it. This has been such and awesome fic.I'm really glad Jo is staying with them again. From the bottom of my heart, thank you for an awesome story. If you ever decide to use jo again you know I'll review it!

Thanks again for being a friend

Joe "Po" Navark
Joe 'Po' Navark 1/2/10 . chapter 11
A Christmas to remember indeed, Gifts and memories were exchanged, that's a great Christmas in my book. Very nice chapter man
Joe 'Po' Navark 1/2/10 . chapter 10
Sweet! It's great to see more of Musaki's past.
Wonder Panda Tan-Tan 1/2/10 . chapter 12
This fic really warmed my heart, in so many ways! You did great with Kage, but you should know that Fu doesnt obsess over pink like that, and Ichi doesnt argue with Kaguya... theyre love interests but there somewhat oblivious to it. It was good overall, I liked how you took some ideas from my fic as well. Maybe you could make a short fic with Musaki and Ichi playing together with their teddy bears Sparky and Teddie lol. Hope you had a happy new year, and get ready for my newest kingdom hearts chapter!
Joe 'Po' Navark 1/1/10 . chapter 9
I had never heard that song before, but I just looked it up on youtube. Could not have been a more appropriate and sweet song! Very nice
Joe 'Po' Navark 1/1/10 . chapter 8
I'll tell ya, I'm a sucker for sleep overs. This one was pretty good. Jo is opening up more and the others seem to like him.
Joe 'Po' Navark 12/28/09 . chapter 7
Like the stories. Shifu's was definitely the saddest. Man that stinks for him. Good chapter

Joe N.
Joe 'Po' Navark 12/28/09 . chapter 6
Hope Musaki loves his present. I like thelittle scene between Musaki and Tigress. Jo is meeting more people I see, can't wait!
Joe 'Po' Navark 12/28/09 . chapter 5
Loved how they got to share their stories with eachother as well as all their other interest. And I REALLY loved that poem you wrote. It's exactly something Jo would have written and fits him so well.

Great job
Wonder Panda Tan-Tan 12/28/09 . chapter 7
I'm glad that Ichi could make Shifu feel better, man these chapters are awesome!
Joe 'Po' Navark 12/23/09 . chapter 4
Ok I was little shocked when I found out Jo was living in caves instead of his foster parents, but I like that Po offered him a stay. Lil' Saki & the Next Dragon Warrior's friendship is growing more and more
Wonder Panda Tan-Tan 12/23/09 . chapter 4
Awesome, I wasn'texpecting you to put Kaguya in but keep uo the good work!
Joe 'Po' Navark 12/21/09 . chapter 3
GREAT chapter! I absolutely love Po's reaction in the reuniting. In a way, it makes me wanna be right there when it happens. Also like the jokes with mantis and Tigress.

I'll probably have mine up tomorrow morning. It won't mesh exactly right with yours but I really hope you like it .

Joe N.
Joe 'Po' Navark 12/21/09 . chapter 2
Aw that was nice of Musaki. I love it when two OC's meet Kinda surprised that Jo wasn't able to kick their butts though. But Loved the chapter. Can't wait till they meet again.

Joe N.
Joe 'Po' Navark 12/21/09 . chapter 1
So far so good and it's going GREAT!
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