|Reviews for Take by Storm|
| Eternal Dumas 1/1/10 . chapter 2
I found the Straw Hats being oddly calm about the whole Luffy being captured situation kind of strange but then, it's Luffy they're worried about and he has a tendency of doing a ton of crazy things so they're used to it.
Wah, I'm worried about Luffy! I'm not looking forward to the torture in store for Luffy. And is Whitebeard going to live? (worriedworried)
| Hmob1994 12/29/09 . chapter 2
NO! Luffy! Sniff...
Omg, This is all so exciting... How will the crew save him
... Are they gonna meet up with Ace?
OMG! Can't wait for the next update! XD
| Akemichan07 12/29/09 . chapter 2
Hi! You updated so quickly, I'm happy I like the part with Ace, especially the part about freedom and his feeling when he discovered about Luffy's situation. I think it's IC his enoumous concern about Luffy, and I liked even Marco was thinking to save him somehow. I'd like now to see Jimbe and Iva's reaction too, I'm sure they would been worried too. I'm happy to see the Mugiwara together again, and see you decided not to change them (expecially poor Sanji T.T), but I wonder if you have a power up for them based on their islands... I think I have to wait to find out Maybe they're a little too quiet, seeing the situation, but it's not so OC: I mean, Luffy needs them, they had to not get panic! I wonder if you have someone else in ming to help Luffy: I'd like to see Kidd or Law try, but I think also it'll be a little strange... Weel, thanks you for this nice chapter Happy New Year!
| Blobfishington 12/28/09 . chapter 2
Bahahaha! Awesome chapter!
You're very good at keeping everyone in character. It all sounded very natural.
The only advice I can offer is to watch your tenses. You either stick with past tense or present, don't alternate. :)
Update when you can!
| theShizzam 12/27/09 . chapter 2
Don't forget Ivankov, somehow I don't see him just letting Luffy go. Dragon would totally kill him. Also, the crew seems a little too calm about the situation. They might not be hysterical, but I think that they would at least be grim. I certainly don't see Usopp and Chopper (the weak-willed of the group) enjoying a sundae. Usopp would prolly be spouting off all the worst possible scenarios (he defeated Perona for a reason).
On another note, as realistic as the Whitebeard pirates leaving Luffy behind is, I don't think it'd happen. Luffy is too inspiring of a character. I can't imagine that with the respect of Whitebeard, Jimbei, Ivankov, and even Crocodile (though not Buggy) nobody would go to significant lengths to retrieve him. If the invaders are weakened, the marines wouldn't be at their best either.
Implausibilities aside, yours is one of the few One Piece stories I can stand. It has a plot, an interesting one, without the usual insignificant romantic intrigues, OCs, and grammatical errors. Please continue.
| eternitybeckons 12/27/09 . chapter 2
Ace must be horrified, his worst fear has come true. Got to say im looking forward to the mugiwara break in to Imple Down. When Luffy did it it was amazing, so i can't even begin to think how epic its going to be with everyone else, expecially if the Whitebeard Kaizokudan help.
Can't wait for the next update! -
| Lady Emzebel 12/27/09 . chapter 2
Oh gawd, I've been looking for ages for a story like this..."The Crew Rescues Luffy"...and I've finally found one! *squee!*
I really really like it so far. Everyone's so IC and just brilliant, and Sanji's little happy freakout at seeing the girls again was funny. XD
Can't wait for more chapters!
| FictionJunction 12/27/09 . chapter 1
I have nothing much to say, except that this is a great story so far, well written and very interesting. You are one of the few who dares write about the current events in the manga and make your own version of it, it looks very promising, I can't wait for the next chapter
| Anomity 12/26/09 . chapter 2
Nice I think that the strawhat crew reunited rather quickly. When Luffy begins his journey to impel down, only 6-7 days remain until Ace's execution.(I cant remember exactly though, sorry if this is inaccurate) So, the total number of days the strawhat crew has been separated is about 14 days (2 weeks). Now, considering that Robin is stuck in East Blue, Chopper is stuck in North Blue and the rest are somewhere in the Grand Line, it seems rather unlikely that they managed to get to Shabondy in 2 weeks, especially chopper. I don't mean for this to sound harsh, or for this to be intended as a flame, I'm just saying that you should look out for these kind of impossibilities. Other than that technical problem,the story continues to be great. Keep up the good work! xD
| Darkness34 12/26/09 . chapter 2
buggy is such a nami and usopp are brave enough, he should be to. Oh yah, can't wait for the next ch.
| callosum 12/26/09 . chapter 2
Hey, interesting start! It's a fairly plausible what-if scenario. I'll be looking out for your updates!
| Shimo Ino 12/26/09 . chapter 2
Dude. I am loving this so much! Everything is amazing from the characterization to the plot itself! Please, please continue!
| Amethyst Turtle 12/26/09 . chapter 2
Excellent what-if scenario! It's definitely catching my interest, so I can't wait to see how it turns out!
| Blobfishington 12/24/09 . chapter 1
Oh, how interesting! Keep it up!
| Akemichan07 12/23/09 . chapter 1
Hi! This is really wonderful! I liked so much how you had drescibed Luffy throught Sengoku's eyes, and the scene about Haki burst. I like Garp and Sengoku be so IC afterall. Amazing! I'm really curious to know who o when will come to rescue Rufy. I mean, sure the StrawHas, but Iva? Jinbe? Ace? They shoulnd't had left Rufy like this, shoulnd't they? Oh, I hope to see them all soon! .- Bye