|Reviews for Taken|
| anneangel 12/26/09 . chapter 3
ok, im reviewing
| girlfrakes 12/25/09 . chapter 4
Need to put in some reasons like why he took her, what he expects. He has to have some kind of reaction as she tries more aggressively to escape. Obviously some rules will come up. Bella needs to show more attractions to Edward somehow. The idea here is great but some answers need to be given.
| anneangel 12/25/09 . chapter 4
i love this story
| KittyPimms 12/23/09 . chapter 3
I want eggs! Sorry, hunger's doing the talking. Er, typing. Edward's so sweet! A kidnapper, but a really cute, sweet kidnapper :)
| KristenStewartFan 12/23/09 . chapter 4
sounds really good i hope that u will continue and im really looking forward to Edwards pov
| lilyella 12/22/09 . chapter 3
nice story. i would love to read about edward's pov.
| tania15 12/22/09 . chapter 3
I like the concept you came up with, it hasn't been over done. It's also different from most 'Efward kidnaps Bella' fics. I think that's what makes your idea interesting. Anyways, keep up the good work. I'm hoping to read a new chapter sometime soon.
| Triinu 12/22/09 . chapter 3
how nice..I didnt expect a update that soon at first but I'm happy for that ofc. I actually like his story.
for a critcism I can tell you only that you should in some way put more emotion and thought in it..kind of make it longer (and of course If I would be you I wouldn't know how do to it) Story itself is good:D
| SmokeyMelina 12/22/09 . chapter 3
Great story so far! Can't wait for more )
| TwilightSVU 12/22/09 . chapter 1
Can't wait to read more
| Dressed-IN-Blood 12/22/09 . chapter 3
wow this is so good, defiantly going to be a tear jerker. it is really well written and easy to understand! keep up the good work!
| Marianka 12/22/09 . chapter 3
I like it so much.
Merry X-mass happy2010.:)
| xpaigex 12/22/09 . chapter 3
oh i love this so far
| Marianka 12/21/09 . chapter 2
Fantastic how much Emotion and
deep strong Feelings u put in
here,but i hope i must not long
wait for the next chapter and
mayby little bit longer Chapter.
Merryx-mass and happy 2010..)
| Marianka 12/21/09 . chapter 1
I love so Storysw
u catch my heart