ok, im reviewing

Need to put in some reasons like why he took her, what he expects. He has to have some kind of reaction as she tries more aggressively to escape. Obviously some rules will come up. Bella needs to show more attractions to Edward somehow. The idea here is great but some answers need to be given.

i love this story

I want eggs! Sorry, hunger's doing the talking. Er, typing. Edward's so sweet! A kidnapper, but a really cute, sweet kidnapper :)

sounds really good i hope that u will continue and im really looking forward to Edwards pov

nice story. i would love to read about edward's pov.

I like the concept you came up with, it hasn't been over done. It's also different from most 'Efward kidnaps Bella' fics. I think that's what makes your idea interesting. Anyways, keep up the good work. I'm hoping to read a new chapter sometime soon.

tania15

how nice..I didnt expect a update that soon at first but I'm happy for that ofc. I actually like his story.

for a critcism I can tell you only that you should in some way put more emotion and thought in it..kind of make it longer (and of course If I would be you I wouldn't know how do to it) Story itself is good:D

Great story so far! Can't wait for more )

Can't wait to read more

wow this is so good, defiantly going to be a tear jerker. it is really well written and easy to understand! keep up the good work!

Wow,very emotional.

I like it so much.

Merry X-mass happy2010.:)

oh i love this so far

Fantastic how much Emotion and

deep strong Feelings u put in

here,but i hope i must not long

wait for the next chapter and

mayby little bit longer Chapter.

Merryx-mass and happy 2010..)

I love so Storysw

u catch my heart

with that..)