Yep, never let the young ones out of sight G, trouble always finds themG. Great story... um, I don't see a 'complete' notation... is there more? (asks hopefully G)

Totally terrific! Glad the boys got themselves out!

Yay! The plan worked like a charm! Very effective and our guys are on their way to safety. Love that Oracle was on top of the reports and got Bruce and the others on the way so fast. I'm sure there will be some discussion once things are cleaned up. I did love how Ezra explained the situation to the manager of the bar. Very fun chapter, with lots of action. I'm looking forward to the clean up.

Now that was to easy.

Good.

Still enjoying.

Great chapter! Love how well both teams are analyzing the situation and making plans. They are both well honed and well trained; the bad guys don't stand a chance. Dick is a great wild card and the bad guys are about to get a very big surprise. It's great to see Oracle finding out so much information and the teasing back and forth is cute. At least Bruce and the guys have a direction to look in. Kincaid is only a little bit stupid but about to learn a valuable life lesson. Looking forward to more!

Good!

Good start.

Glad you updated.

Great to see more of this! Nice that the guys are recovering from their kidnapping and figuring things out. Love how JD figured out just who they were in trouble with; they are going to have to do some fast talking to get out of trouble with Chris, Buck and Bruce! This does have some undertones as to who has them and for what reason; great how Dick managed to give Bruce the heads up. Looking forward to more and thanks for this part.

I love it, so what will happen to the idiots that grabbed the boys? Looking forward to more. thank you

This is getting off to a great start! Love that the trouble magnets managed to find something in San Diego on Spring Break. I'm thinking the criminals didn't have any idea who they grabbed and unless Bruce and the others hurry; Vin, JD and Dick will rescue themselves. Looking forward to more!

Nice start.