SO. ADDICTIVE. I love them soooooooooo much.

I cried a couple times

I lovvve this story that's my short version of what I wanted to really say love love absolutely love

Urgh, stop torturing me with if they can have kids! If I skipped chapters, I could definitely know the truth, but no being good and reading the story. I hate you for carrying it on and on by the way! Hahaha.

Hmmm...Jake's last vivid dream came true. Could this be more foreshadowing?

I love this story, off to read the third installment now. XD

Omg your story just keeps getting better and better I loved the start of your authors note at the end of the chapter, "holy horny Jacob batman" omg that is just too funny, I still cannot believe that a dude is writing this usually it's girls because we're just so obsessed with sexy Jacob black

Ok I'm dying here you keep giving jake and nessie all these dreams about their kids and have them talk about it but you've had it said in the story that Nessie is infertile, which is it I'm dying to know here, I've Already read a story similar to this called all grown up and it's by vanessawolfe724 and it's a series like yours and Nessie had 5 kids in that one and has had kids in every other one I've read so im dying to know what'll happen for this one.

Why doesn't she just show everyone what she goes through with her gift that would make it a lot easier for everyone to understand

andy is a a- b- m-f-,-,-

I love this story I hope all nessie's pain means she can have kids. I will have to keep reading to see.

She is still a bratt. It is really hard to like this girl!

Ive read part 3 so why do you keep saying nessie cant have children in your stories? Im just is still an awesome story!

THANK you!

This story is awesome! But please dont make Nessie cheat on Jacob! I'm begging you!