 snow.bunny.07 2009-11-24 . chapter 1Wow, this was a great fanfic, definitely one of my more favorite reads. There were quite a few parts of this story that actually made me laugh aloud, the condom part being an obvious one (lmao). Not to mention the "you are what you eat" line, which was absolutely hilarious. 10/10, excellent work!
For some reason though, the part that had me laughing the hardest was:
"I'm gonna GET-CHA!"
...ROFL. XD |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-24 . chapter 19Damn! Great work. Now onto the sequel. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-24 . chapter 18OMG! Vegeta extended his hand towards the house and finished, "-And that ego is mine."
He fired.
I din't see that coming. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-24 . chapter 17Great work. Am really starting to dislike Yamcha. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-24 . chapter 16Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-24 . chapter 15Great work. Also this is the first fic I read that was actually a V/B as true main pairing. And I read your one shot, their excellent. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-23 . chapter 14Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-23 . chapter 13Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-23 . chapter 12Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-23 . chapter 11Poor Vegeta. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-23 . chapter 10I thought it was Bulma. Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-23 . chapter 9Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-23 . chapter 8Is Piccolo going to see Kami. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-23 . chapter 7Great work. |
 Itachi's aprentice 2009-11-23 . chapter 6Holy Crap! Poor price Vegeta. |