HAHAHAHA I CANNOT BELIEVE he ate the condom. i had to wipe away tears.

** my life...
This was absolutely stunning, I enjoyed reading every little word. There were times that I had to stop because whatever it was that I had read last had me rolling around my bed with utter joy. xD
You definitely have talent and I could continue to brag about your writing style for hours but for now, I'm much more interested in the other things that I hope you have written. 3

This was definitley descriptive. xD I enjoyed their 'tiff'. xD And also this story as well. x3 I shall continue to read the rest of it as wel.

This is my absolute favorite Vegeta/Bulma beginnings story of all time. This is how I actually envision them getting together. Effing amazing! Creative, hilarious, exciting, beautiful, HOT... oh man. This could not be more perfect. Excellent job.

Okay I really loved your story up until this chapter., i can't stand it when he sleeps with someone else., ,...

wow your story is asome, i hopped yu would go farther but this is great just as it is

I LOVE this story! I remember my first time reading it was when the sequel came out. I was so young, and I didn't read the lemons because I was under 17 and thought I would get in trouble. And I didn't really understand the adult themes. I just reread it a few days ago, along with the 2nd and 3rd installments, and I have to say THANK YOU for writing this! Everyone is so in character, the plot is believable, there is awesome chemistry and character development, and was one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I am going to review the other parts of this as well.

ok bin reading for like 2 hours straigt my eyes are starting to hurt so i need a break but is sure as hell wassent going to stop without reviewing damn your good and may i coplimant you on vegeta`s sarcasem it`s great and so him ah love this storie cant wait till to morrow to continue

Wow, just read the first three chapters of your story, and it's truly amazing. You've really managed to depict the characters. It'll take me some time to read all 19 chapters, and then on to the two sequels you've written, but I've no doubts I'll read it all, thanks for uploading this :)

hi, been reading ur fic recently (for the first time). know that u have retired, dont know whether u'd read this, but anyway... i always love the concept of parallel universe, thanks for putting it in a DBZ fic! Hahaha, and it's great that u portrayed Vegeta as a rather knowledgable person :)

This is good that Bulma and Vegeta are together!
Now i want to know this nightmares...=O

OMG,i loved it, Vegeta admitted for himself that he cared for Bulma! :)
your story is great!

You are a genius. This is brilliant and you should bet a medal, or something. I like the second to last PARAGRAPH, I don't count the last line as a paragraph, but it is just so... well written that it needs recognition.

Amazing story!

Darke Angelus, I hope you still read reviews. I noticed you decided to retire from fanfiction and it is actually quiet sad to learn that piece of information. I read this first volume and I have to say you achieved something impressive, grabbed and kept my ever elusive attention. You are very skilled at this, why did you retire? Aiming for other things in life does not have to mean neglecting this great gift you have, which is writing. If you ever want to do a little bit of something Vegeta and Bulma to read, reflecting some of what has been going on with your life and how that has changed you as a person, you'll have a welcoming reader here. Just so you know, this volume was high octane entertaining. Honestly? a lot of it was outrageous and shocking, but your style grew into me and now I am off to continue with the rest of what you had to offer.

Your drawings are great. I like your Vegeta. Don't shed that talent away.

Morning Breeze