Love this story! :D

i've read alot of ur dbz fics to far and i'm enjoying them, except I notice how ridiculously pathetic you make vegeta emotionally and strength wise where the others are concerned even tho technically he's be easily capable of overpowering them. like he has absolutely no self control or awareness, which pretty much takes him out of canon character. its a bit of a downside but doesnt ruin the stories I guess.

I like it

That was one hell of a story!

I would have liked to review each and every single chapter, but FF. net wouldn't let me, some account trouble I guess.

I have felt a lot of emotions throughout this whole story. If that is what it felt like to me, I can't even imagine what it must have meant to you. I loved this piece of art, I hurt with the characters and I hated it when they were forced apart. In mind I have my very own concept of Trunk's conception and it is far from yours. But I do like alternatives, especially yours.

Thank you for this wonderful story, thank you for the character insight, the love with which you handled the tough topics and the way you let everyone interact whith each other.

Thank you very much for sharing it with everyone!

Damn it, stupid Yamcha... to be honest, I never really liked him. He was always too weak, too lazy or way too into other girls. I hope he beats himself up for the trouble he had caused.

Oh boy, poor Vegeta. Yes he was evil, yes he did some stupid and unforgivable things, but Bulma's right: no one looks beyond that.

Bulma and her big mouth, but I'll guess Vegeta will come around soon.

Almost, almost! Nice chapter!

Oh boy, who would have thought Vegeta was such an intelligent man. You gave the character some depth.

Damn, I feel sorry for Vegeta. But the meathead is always just too proud to admit that he isn't well. He simply can't lose.

V/B stories are my favourite. After the first chapter I'd say that I'm rather interested and I want to go on with the next one. I think it's quite hard to decipher how their twisted relationship actually began. Good start though!

I LOVED IT! Please come back and write more!

Easilly one of the best B/V fanfics ever...Loved every bit of it

Poor vegeta:(

Dang, I must admit that you are the best DBZ writer whose stories I have read. From the revelations of Vegeta's past, to his battle with his own memories and emotions, to the idiot's interference; you managed to ensnare my interest with a well-written, articulate beginning. I will read the sequels tomorrow, but for now I must rest...