Very nice story! Great characters! I think you got them down! Nice to see Myka and her dad work things out. :)

I loved this fic! I liked that she had her own room that she could hide out in and that she made Pete promise not to tell them how upset and scared she was (it seemed just like her to do that). Great job, a very interesting read! ]

Love this chapter and Myka's Dad calling Pete Pip. Love that! Very nicely done.

I've got a wicked grin on my face, and I'm certain you know why. What a wonderful surprise!

All in all, a really well done story that stayed true to the canon of the show but took the time to explore relationships further. I'm honored that you wrote this for me. Thanks!

Loved this chapter so much, I read it twice. Surprised, I'm sure you are not. Wonderful chemistry between Myka and Pete. It was shippy without really venturing into uncharted territory...perfectly appropriate for what has been established on the show thus far.

Thank you. That was very good.

Very moving and powerful. You got it nailed. You should be writing for Warehouse 13. Anxious to read more.

Wow! You really have these characters down pat. Keep it up! Loving it!

Hi! I just wanted to say that I loved your story very much. It has become one of my favourite Warehouse 13 stories. What a shame that's the last chapter. I hope you'll write many other stories soon.

Another great chapter. You've done a good job of capturing Myka's issues with her Dad without making her too whiny. Pete's support has been touching and true to the nature of the character.

Excellent start! Love the 'will do Kirk out' LOL. Gotta love Pete.

Loved the first chapter! You have the voices spot on...especially Pete. Loved his "Kirk out". I think Myka's daddy issues are accurate and true to what was portrayed on the show. The stab at my J.D. Robb lovin was a low blow. ;)

Great job!:)

Very well done! People are in charactor and everything. looking forward to more!