What a good laugh, haha, Vegeta's last remark was the best of this OS. Great!

Okay, here it is: I'm DYING laughing! This story totally cracked me up! I was so getting glares from my parents as their precious Cowboys were losing and I was about to cry from laughing so hard at Vegeta and the trouble with his kids.

I usually leave really long reviews, but I'm short on time tonight. So, I'll leave it here and only add two more things. One, Jadedbest was totally right to send me to your stories. I should have listened to her long ago.

Two, I'll catcha later and leave a longer review the next time I read. Peace and Out! mar/hippiechic

Holy crap! That's hilarious! Vegeta was exactly in character and so funni to imagine when he got oil and feathers on himself. I literally cracked up laughing through out the whole story. Love it, deffinatly my favorite

OMG, laughed so much! Loved the ending!

great story as always, just priceless, though i didnt imagine trunks being that... how do i put this... sexually active at that age

lol that is amazingly funny omg ha ha ha great story

haha i've read this so many times but still love it.

Oh my God, yes. I don't care what you say about this one being your first story and not your best... this was hysterical. Vegeta has always reminded me of my dad (weirdly enough) and I can see him doing exactly all of this, minus the flying. I was also holding back laughter the entire way through (can't wake up the family, haha). Great job with this!

this is horrible! i can't stop laughing!

*teary-eyed-rolling-on-on-the-bed scene*

wow- you did an excellent job with this fic- i laughed until I just about cried- great job!

Bwahahahahahahahahahaha! XD the woes of parenthood.

"If the next bitch you screw tells you she's on the pill - DON'T YOU FUCKING BELIEVE IT!"

Greatest. Line. EVER! XD

OMG the best line's ever!

"I said, WE'LL SPLIT UP HERE -"

"DID YOU JUST CALL ME A SHITTY QUEER?"

and

"If the next bitch you screw tells you she's on the pill - DON'T YOU FUCKING BELIEVE IT!"

you, are the best writer ever. I was laughing pretty much the entire time. You're my hero, can't wait to read more.

"If the next bitch you screw tells you she's on the pill - DON'T YOU FUCKING BELIEVE IT!"

That part was so funny. Great work.

Thats why we love Vegeta.

You are an excellent story teller.