Never thought that Vegeta and Bulma pulled the strings here. Nicely done. I love that evil couple!

Wow. The part with Yamcha's house amused me greatly but the part that honestly amused me the most was the fact that Trunks apparently snuck out so much that they had to put a motion detector on his window. I wonder if that would even work if he moves fast enough. Anyways, awesome job!

-d101

I. Couldn't. Stop. Laughing. Seriously, I'm still choking and wheezing...

Your portrayal of Vegeta, and Bulma are so spot on. I have already

read most of your DBZ fics. Not disappointed at all.

Hahaha! this is SO funny! i never liked that yamcha!

Keep writing!

xoxo

alixia

That was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO funny! Seriously, I've read just about all your stories (but I haven't reviewed simply because I'm relatively new here and thought my opinion would suck to you), and I do not find fault in any of them! This was just HILARIOUS. Yamcha's reaction and Vegeta during the whole thing...stealing a turkey and beer from a guy who made Bra cry...so Vegeta-ish! I LOVED IT!

Yeah, I would say that modeling a Catwoman costume in front of Vegeta would be a bad idea for Bulma. I can not see the costume ever suriviving.

What? The fairy costume came from Goten? Lol. Though, I must say, before I watched GT, my entire family was firmly convinced Goten and Trunks were going to grow up to be gay together. Hmm. Maybe I we are not the only ones who have had such thoughts.

Great touch! I love having the quip about the year before with Bulma getting arrested. I can not recall reading any other story that actually had Bulma getting in trouble with the law. Bonus points for originality.

That is something I would pay money to see! Vegeta, trick or treating with kids and begging for candy since he is not much taller than they are!

Bulma argues with other moms. Vegeta just robs guys who do not have enough candy to make it through the night. That is so much better.

I love the hatred you have Yamcha having toward Vegeta. Having Yamcha's "Miss October" comment on how cute Vegeta is was a definite bonus.

Great job! I can totally see Bulma and Vegeta conspiring to make Yamcha's life a living nightmare. Great job!

Overall, very well done. You packed this story with plenty of humor. I enjoyed reading immensely. I will catch you on the flip side!

Until the next time, Peace and Out! mar/hippiechic

This is a great story!

*sigh* once again awesome job :) Is there not one story that isn't good? Ahh! Lol

Bleepedybleepbleep.

Ha ha ha, this story was hilarious! Vegeta and Bulma are so evil! I dont think Vegeta was 52 at the time, he was somewhere in his early 40s...

He is cute :D

incredible work!

HawkAngel

i feel soooooooo sorry to yamcha but hey it was pretty funny

ok so now it's vegeta taking after his son, well thats a change in story line, but i love it all the same! what would be funny is to see the reaction on bullas face when she sees her candy stash though, that would be funny. but otherwise once again an absolutely perfect story

That was fucking awesome xD

A very funny one-shot!

lol omg that was hilarious i can't breath i'm laughing so hard hahaha nice story D