A great story. Very well written.

wow it was a good one thanks

Lia, do you still write? I remember you from the original LOTR discipline group. Did you know we have a brand new group now? Would love to invite you! If you're still around and interested drop me a line and I will invite you - I have always enjoyed your fics, probably because I'm also a hobbit writer!

Cathleen

I liked the story, but maybe you should add some chapters coz it was very short.

DUDE! *Wonders why she just said that* COOLIES! (It gets more angst-y later on, right?)

Oooh, write more! :-

This is a sweet story and I'd like more.

You should not worry about Merry's sister not being in the family tree compiled by JRR. There is a disclaimer which says that the listings are incomplete. For example, he does not show any offspring for Merry, although later on mentions his son. A lot of writers take these lists as cannon and they should not.

BTW - please continue.

Great work so far :-) Pippin really does know how to get into trouble, doesn't he? hehehe More soon, please?

Cool! Gotta love Pippin!

I love all your fics Lia. They're so wonderfully 'Tom Saywer and Huckleberry Finn-ish'. Please write more (and longer!) stories. I'd love to see how other hobbit-parents warn their children not to play with 'those two rascals' while those same-said children idiolize the intrepid duo. I'd also love to see how their parents (be it their Mum and Da, Gandalf or Uncle Bilbo) continue to love the exasperating pair, no matter WHAT they did.

It was cute...a little bit short, though. You should write something longer, in which you portrait the characters of them both.