Loved the composition on this piece. The last line was a stunning punch to the gut! Woo!

Thanks for writing!

Wow, seriously freaky! I've never thought of Dark Jak in THAT way before, but yeah, we've already SEEN the effects of dark eco on Gol and Maia. And poor Jak, having to watch himself slowly becoming just like them... No wonder he lost his way for awhile :(

OH HEY, IT'S KIRA.

So I wasn't aware that you posted this wonderful tidbit on this site. 3 But I'll say it again - wonderful gift, wonderful fic. :D

Dude, this is creepy. Good job in it

wow. just wow.

that was freaking awesome! the ending was great! totally faving this!

Amazing! Short sharp and it had an excellent one-liner ending. I actually never concidered the similarity between Dark Jak and Gol Acheron... Insightful and very true. Thankyou, this was an inspiring piece

now thas scary, but a nice oneshot, or a story if u keep on writing

not exactly gol but close enough to be extremely frightening. but whats funny is gol never had horns. jak's head just made the connection because he really is going crazy.

this is good so far keep on writing

Gol is so evil!