Hey, I never thought of Epoch being "alive" but it does make sense. Good idea! Nice work! etc etc

Wow! That was fantastic! Once I figured it out, everything made sence! VERY well written! You write wonderfully! :)

Not bad at all! You had me fliting around, thing first it was Magus, the Gasper, the only

realizing it was Epoch about the fifth to last paragraph.

Never did like the "Kill Epoch" ending, though. I always stuck with the Black Omen. _

Write more of these. I like.

Very good... you gave an inanimate object a believable character! Kept me guessing!

This was a cool story; you keep up the excellent work.

Don't beat yourself up. You've got some good skills, and i think that your POV writing worked well. Keep up the good stuff!

OOo! Nifty! Short, but sweet. Giving the Epoch a bit of intelligence is rather nifty- reminds me of a really Old Sci-Fi comic I read quite some time ago by the title of 'I Rocket'. I suggest you try writing something longer one of these days to see what you could do :)