awww, sappy fluff! But it was kinda cute and I enjoy the occasional bit of fluff. Really good! I definitely would not mind more!

Keep lving,loving,laughing,writing

Peace,

Maia

So beautiful! I love the sound of the last guy. But why does Max have blue eyes? Doesn't she have brown? Anyway I'm not suppose to criticize I'm suppose to review. Brilliant! I loved it! It was so magical. I love the way you say she is a dot in a sea! So amazing!