|Reviews for The happiness of three|
| jgood27 3/19/11 . chapter 3
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
| Blue-Eyed Chica 2/12/11 . chapter 3
love it! i really hope you start updating again soon. it was just getting good D
| Wish Lost 4/18/10 . chapter 3
Interesting, I'm excited for the next chapter
| Kai Luna 3/21/10 . chapter 1
Forgive me for replying here- you've disabled your PM system, and I can't review again on your other story.
What I meant was some of your paragraphs are much too large, so much that it's comparable to China's Great Wall. I suggest breaking them up, because it's hard to read for the most part.
A paragraph should not have more than about 6-10 lines. Anymore and it just gets ridiculous.
| PrincessInTheRain 1/3/10 . chapter 1
THat was just amazing! I can't wait for more! The entire plot is exciting and really unusual actually..and i love it! Please update soon :)