Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update

love it! i really hope you start updating again soon. it was just getting good D

Interesting, I'm excited for the next chapter

Forgive me for replying here- you've disabled your PM system, and I can't review again on your other story.

What I meant was some of your paragraphs are much too large, so much that it's comparable to China's Great Wall. I suggest breaking them up, because it's hard to read for the most part.

A paragraph should not have more than about 6-10 lines. Anymore and it just gets ridiculous.

THat was just amazing! I can't wait for more! The entire plot is exciting and really unusual actually..and i love it! Please update soon :)