This was really good and I think you really wrote him well :)

I honestly loved hassan and sorhab during the entire book. I wish there was more on the two even though the book was amazing the way it was anyways.

nice story I loved it

Sad...*tears up*

very sad. I liked it. It had a good voice. A sort of honesty.

Very well- written! A few typos, but not very noticeable. A good characterisation of Sohrab :)