This was written before the debut of The Eleventh Doctor. So you had no idea how he would behave. It'd probably be a good idea to say this is the Tenth instead.

This is great! I love it!

Loved it! I'm a massive fan of the 11th Doctor, and I think you caught him really well! No chance of a sequel? Some trillion chapter saga adventure with the Doctor and Buffy? I'd definitely read it! What better crew for the Doctor than the Scoobies? Good job anyway!

Aww...Great.

You know, I was half expecting him to offer her a jelly baby there. Good job!

Bahahah! I think it's 10 here. Sounds like 10 (though you're rigjt, we don't really know what 11s going to be like). I love how Buffy totally takes everything point blank. Lol.