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LostC 3/20/04 . chapter 1
"'I... I feel... kinda...' Relena can barely talk. I feel dizzy... is it you, Dorothy? It is only longing and desire but look at what it does to me.
Dorothy slowly grabs Relena's hand, amazed to have it in her grasp. A hard swallow, time has stopped...
'I'm falling...' Relena whispers, seemingly floating to the ground, body light as a feather.
Dorothy descends with her, cradling the girl in her arms then lowering her to the ground."
It's definately sexy.
You're the queen.
Can I worship?
[lostc]
Nomak 12/10/03 . chapter 1
I can't believe it took me this long to find your work... I guess that just means I have a lot to look forward to for the next few days :)
I love your short fics, they feel like breezes blowing over a watercolor, surreal. Especially DR. The last part of OK is just great. Short, just words, then the last line.
Keep up the good work!
Misura 3/7/03 . chapter 1
This is the first fic I read on this pair and I have to admit I enjoyed reading it very much.
Katt006 1/29/02 . chapter 1
I'm usually a fan of straight couples but that's not to say I enjoy yuri. As for DorothyxRelena *Dreamy sigh* Good job, it was cute .
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