 Desktop Warrior 12/24/09 . chapter 1That was...oh man, I can't even describe it. Pure gold, from start to finish. So many comedic and romantic moments - I was in tears of laughter for most of it. Best of all, it features one of my fave pairings - KasibShipping FTW! I knew it would be hilarious the moment Ari came in through the chimney, that was really one of the funniest things I've ever read! The best scene, of course, was the kiss, which was very natural and casual. I loved how Stantler was trying to bring them together with its illusions, it's one of those "Aww" moments.
Seriously, though, I can't praise this enough. Excellent writing, descriptive, smooth flow of events, you name it. The only question I have concerns the title. I don't speak Italian (I'm assuming that's the language), so I don't know what it means.
Merry Christmas, bud.
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 ShadowDragoon32 12/24/09 . chapter 1Aw, that was really cute. I enjoyd it- Stantler's are the best Pokemon ever. And I think I get what hapened- she made an illusion to hide the mistletoe, right? Haha, that's great.
Um, not really sure what to say, but good job!
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