nice! the ending caught me by surprise but it was a great surprise! Your style of writing is easy to follow and very descriptive. very well done!

Excellent job. The premise is great, and you're not a bad writer overall-you even know how to use open as opposed to closed quotes. Very good.

There were a few minor things, typos, and towards the beginning, when Daniel is talking about the elm, you wrote, "you're going to *loose* that tree". Unless the tree is mobile and being held back somehow, one does not "loose" a tree-one might, however, **lose** said plant. :)

Other than that, good job!

Wow! I really enjoyed reading that. *giggles* I really loved Boothby. I was thinking about how neat it would have been to make the main character of the story Boothby towards the beginning of the story when you first mentioned his uncle, and when I read the very last line, I got a huge smile on my face. Very well written!

Thank you for posting it at FanFiction.Net. :)

Good. Very, Very, Very good.

Oh this is just fantastic! I absolutely love it. I have a feeling that I should know the name Boothby, but I can't think of where... I love your story. I just feel happy all over!

Hey! I like this! Only two suggestions... one would be to doublespace your paragraphs. It would make the story a lot easier to read it you had a break between the paragraphs.

And two: This you man would have to return home in two days.

That should probably be 'young', right? Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more!