excellent story, with only one noticeable error, Spock, has called Kirk by his first name more than once, ussally off duty, but i loved it

*He no longer tells illogical jokes every duty shift. It has been reduced to every other duty shift.* I love that! ) Very cute!

Very well written - I have to admit I'd find something like this hard to write (I don't like to write not-seen-on-screen personal details about established characters, you see) - but it seems to be easy for you. If that style suits you, carry on, and LL&P.