This is so good! I wish I could write poetry as good as you!

All that lives in her is the part that lives in him?

Wow!

Impressive, I'm hating you for this :P

This flowed beautifully, just like Holli's writing, so I'm positive that she'll love it!

I don't know the charcaters, but I'm sure they are very IC. They sound it, as I know that the books and story is generally quite dramatic.

Well, thats the impression I get from Holli's writing anyway.

"So close that by cutting one you make the other bleed".

That was fantastic, I liked that a lot too!

One of your top poems, beautiful!

Well done Hay!

Merry Christmas!

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You know something, i really, really hate all these people who are SO DAMN GOOD AT POETRY!

It's not even fair. :P

I love Wind on Fire, i really should re read them... Oh well, no time, what with this writing lark.

I loved it... sorry holli i didn't write you anything. I'll ring you at some point :P

Anyway, yes Hay, really beautiful. If i had to use one word to describe wind on fire it would be that actually, and this fitted very well.

Loved it!

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