Honestly. What was Voldy thinking? He just hurt Harry in one of the most horrible ways ever. Harry should totally walk in on them and like... I don't know, run away?,throw a fit?, try suicide because the person he can't lve without just slept with his old lover even after making it clear that he was Harrys'. After he told Harry he loved him. It's your story but is it was mine I would make Voldemort suffer to the point he would prefer the cruciatis over what ever punishment I give hm. To thepoint he is begging for mery... for Harry to come back. Then again thats just me. When are you going to put up the third?

I have read the prequel and this. I felt the emotion woven into the story...Harry's plight as well as Tom's crisis...I was especially moved of Severus' situation and I honestly see him like this.

I wonder though, will you continue this?

You should put a warning or something, saying there's Harry/Snape and Voldemort/Snape in this story. 'Cause there's some people, like me, who hate those pairings. Other than that, great story.

update

I read the first few paragraphs and felt sick to my stomach. If they were going to cheat I wish you had put up a warning. I really could have done without this...

enticing...

man! I'm really enjoying this!

I love Voldemort(T.R)xHarry potter!

please update soon!

Amazing!

I was quite shocked that Severus has like 2 lovers but then it was all beautiful!

Love it!

How is that diary made? It's not simply attached to Harry, or it wouldn't reply when Harry sleeps; it's not a Horcrux, Harry wouldn't split his soul; it must be something similar to portrait, with continuously-updating one-sided connection with Harry, so that it wouldn't be out-of-date.

I loved it!

I cant wait for the third installment

I think Harry and Tom should just go out with each other and stop having one night stands with Severus

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threeway yeah

jk it all up to u

This part was more confusing than the first. It's a wonderful story all the same.

Part three, here I come!

BLOODY BRILLIANT! gawd and the ending was insane! i kno you got bored with this story but it never showed in your writing. Both installments were wicked. Great Job. Brava!

when can i read more on this storie? please i beg you to contune this storie. can you e mail me when you deside to

write more. at( )

ok, what harry did, sleeping with severus, was wrong. what tom just did is much, much worse. thank you for writing this and i can't wait for the next installment! O