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Nate 10/29/11 . chapter 1
Yay! I think I just discovered my liking for France/America. Never thought much about it before, but it's pretty cool.
Misaki Tsuki 12/12/10 . chapter 1
FrUS needs more love. I seriously loved this. No, seriously. I wanted to try and give critique but...its just so them! So simply sexy! Plz write more FrUS in the future and I will give you my first born. ;)
Flor de ceibo 10/27/10 . chapter 1
I personally think that pun was wonderful, fyi *laughs*. And God, this is exactly what I was looking for in a FrUS fic. It was seriously adorable, and they were just so *them* still.

I particularly liked Francis checking him out. It sounded like what he would think, in my opinion. Just... I loved this!
Hikari Heartache 6/21/10 . chapter 1
This is soooo cute! _ and who better to go to for a fashion makeover then France? Lol
LupinandHarry 6/15/10 . chapter 1
Framerica is my pairing of the day so I was super happy to read this adorable one shot.

Really very cute! :D
muchoblidged 5/28/10 . chapter 1
I LOVE puns! Puns are beautiful, even if no one else thinks they are.

On the matter of the story, I like how you write France. Flirtatious, but not overtly perverted. I always thought France had more class than many people wrote him with, and you gave that to him. America's stubbornness contrasted by France's elegant persistence was adorable. You're right - FrancexAmerica isn't very common, but you did a wonderful job with them! Je t'aime!
Lovely Pencil 5/1/10 . chapter 1
That was adorable, and no, the pun did not make me change my opinion about you. :D

Love your story.
Kelissa 4/12/10 . chapter 1
Oh this made me happy I strangely like this couple and this is why. You did them justice.
sakerat 2/15/10 . chapter 1
Wow what a great fic! I love France/America together. You did a great job with this.
VanillaSlash 1/13/10 . chapter 1
I loved it! France checking out America was too sexy; especially with the internal commentary about the latter's physique. o- Very cute.
HappeDaez 1/1/10 . chapter 1
I love your pun. Also, at the parfit line, I instantly thouht, "is he calling him a desert?"and then i translated it. XD lovely job.
Sexykill69 12/30/09 . chapter 1
lolwhat? XD fantastic! *thumbs up* I like your style kid!
fiftysix-luver 12/24/09 . chapter 1
FRANCE X AMERICA. Finally. Oh God. Yes! This is wonderful! I have to admit that it IS a lame pun, but if lame pun equals to this kind of good fic, I hope you know countless lame puns! XD

KEEP WRITIN'!
EmmileneRosalina 12/24/09 . chapter 1
It made me go 'aw'. I think I just heard my Finland trap spring downstairs, so I have to go see if I caught myself a red-clad nation with a bag o' goodies, but this was so seriously cute. France and America is not really my top combo, but you made it adorable for me without going to the shotacon of when they were a 'family' with England and Canada, and for that, I love you.
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