oh God! i love this one. please post more.

More feels! More feels! Wah! Still can't get over the mental image of doctor-Naruto. Gives me chills just thinking about it. (Too delicious!) And I'm so glad they got a happy ending together! (Heads would have rolled if otherwise) I love happy endings, especially when they get married and have a daughter and are all happy happy, love love love. 3

Awwwwww 1! SO SWEET !

I really liked this Alternate Ending

Oh, and what I forgot to say in my last review: The lyrics worked out really well, usually I don't like lyrics through a story, because they tend to distract me from the actual plot, and I usually skip them. In this story though, they where nice, they didn't bother me

Now for this part, I gotta say I was more impressed by the first one, but that's probably because I'm a sucker for happy endings xD I somehow don't really like them. You wrote a nice one though

-x-

PS: actually, I can't wait to read more alternate endings xD but I guess those'll never come :P

I really like this story. A lot.

You created a perfect plot and a nice way to jump into it. Too bad it's only a one-shot.. hehe :P

I like, well... everything about it :D And the lemon is good Really o..o'

Personally, I suck at lemons (or I think so.. I don't know, most of the times I just delete whatever I wrote and never let anyone read it xD)

-x-

Nice story!

This is awesome! It actually has a plot, unlike most SasuNaru stories that are rated M. I like how Hotaru is fine with parents who are gay.

Just one small mistake - 'prefect' perfect.

MaeKitt

Sorry,but this is actually the first time I'm reviewing anything so it may be lame... Although I must say...It was a good balance between HOT! and Sweet :) ...I liked the fact that Naruto actually stood up to Sasuke(coughcoughattemptedcough)for a while before giving in ...unlike some stories where he immediately succumbs to Sasuke's seduction and shit. So,overall,YOU DID AN AWESOME JOB! YAYZ FOR SASUNARU / NARUSASU ! ...I'd give some tips for improvement but I'm not much of a writer so I wouldn't know what went wrong... o_o;;

I love it! The story is really good and the way is done is awesome. Thanks for writing it. :)

Oh, my my! That was so great! I feel so stupid for not alerting this story when I read the first chapter, but in my defense, it was 'complete' :p

Really, nice job Cat xD Thanks :)

Aww that's a great ending!

I will pretend "Always" was the actual ending lol and that the first chapter was a slice of revenge from Naruto.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us. The characters were brought to life, your descriptive writing style is quite unique-I quite enjoyed it! Thank you again :D

a really great story. although some of the words confused me. but over all a lovely story.

i can't seem to find the right words...

but Fuck! this fic is so amazing and i'm surprised it had a sequel(or alternate ending... who's complaining?)

i usually think that "you only realize something's worth if its gone" people are stupid, but hey it happens.

your writing made me feel the emotions the characters felt. i could really feel sasuke's regret for leaving naruto and naruto being torn between i-still-love-him-so-forgive-him or i-love-him-but-he-left-me-so-don't-forgive-him stuff. the other characters played a small but really important part in making the couple realized that second chances are worth a good try.

this story is well-detailed, right to the end.

you've got good skills for simple yet detailed scenes. solid lot, well-developed characters and arrangement. you've really thought this storyline well. and as a bonus, a hot steamy lemon but you can still feel the love. what more can i say?

i really, really love this story.

one of the best oneshots (or two shots) i've read. and the alternate ending made it even better. please write more wonderful stories and continue to share your wonderful talent to the world., TKcat.

you're an awesome and brilliant writer.

a great ending to a great story _

I love this story so much :'D

I almost cried at one point xD When Naruto and Sasuke were talking in the park, that got me so hard T_T

But I loved this story overall D