Really loved this. Its simplicity was touching and its words were moving. You caught the angst in Faye well; the mourning and the desire to somewhere, somehow, find some sort of bittersweet happiness to carry on.

Really loved it.

Tuppence

Ouch. Just ouch... Poor, poor Faye! I always wondered how she would feel after a blow like that... *nodnod*

wow... that was.. wow

beautifully written and so IC i almost wish you would write a continuation..faye finding happiness, or more family, or something...

it reads like a eulogy, i'm imagining her leaving a note in his old room.. or reading it as they finally destroy/dispose of the bebop or something...

anyway.. i loved it..

:)

hey this is great! it's in depth, just the way i like it. it's very descriptive and just very natural, something that someone would think, not like a revised edited thing. no, a thought is a spontaneous action and a spur of the moment emotion, and that is what you captured here. great job!

check out the ace team stories too, all about cowboy bebop and our individual stories like A Pleasant Dream (fic revolving around faye) and Fight for Spike (pretty self explanitory, reviewers decide whether faye or julia wins) and our ace stories, and a nice little snippet of faye teaching ed to bitch slap!

Excellent piece of work. Captures Faye's thought processes very well and remains true to the 'Bebop' tone. Kudos.

A nice finality that actually SUPPORTS the tragedy of Bebop, not tries to continue it. That's all i have to say, I will with hold my writing style comments.

Sweet and sad...very well done.

A nice little snippet of work, ruminating over the series in a way many other fics have but still treating Faye's thoughts and emotions with poignancy and delicacy. Good beginning job. Looking forward to other work.

AWWWWW, this is so sad! I know a lotta people write stories like this (myself inculed), but this is one of the best i've read. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing more from you. Peace, love and Bebop!