Wow... this story is very intense. I like it! It's something unique. Simon is so sweet to Jeanette. They are a great couple! You are a very good writer, and I'm looking foward to when you update the story!

Now what if the french man had a daughter and the french man began selling simon and jeannette's songs and buying his daughter more stuff and the daughter wondered how and why because she was living with her mother and he didn't have a job. So one day, her mom got sick and the girl had to go with the french man. He told her to stay in the car but she got out anyways and saw him beating her favorite chipmunk, Simon. Her dad promises to give her anything she wants as long as she doesn't go to the polise. She agrees but that doesn't stop her from helping Simon and Jeannette excape though...

P.S. I want to be the girl ( her name is Danielle and she's a 13 year old tomboy ) and please tell me how you feel about my idea and let me know if you will be using it.

Hey... i have a song suggestion for the next chap... how bout trying crawl by chris brown. It fits the situation that Simon and Jeannette are on. Update soon!

good job!

please update soon :)

oh poor chipmunks :(

Another great chapter! I loved how Simon and Jean cheered themselves by singing "Seasons of Love" from Rent.

Finally, we meet the man who orchestrated the kidnapping, he wants to sell Simon's and Jean's music. Simon has stated that he would agree on the condition that he and Jean get to talk to their families on the phone so that they would know they are alive.

I hope that Simon and Jean would find a way to escape or let their families know where they're being held. I also hope that neither of them die in the process.

Update soon!

that chappy betta be up fast! this story is good stuff!

well, they are trying to save themselves. thats good. please dont end the story in one of them dying. i kinda hate that. anyways, i like this chapter.

Wow this is REALLY good. I feel so bad for Dave, Theodore, Alvin and the rest but I liked what you had Theodore say. I love this story it's really beautiful. I hope you update soon:)

I feel so bad for Dave, Miss Miller and the rest of the gang. I hope that Simon and Jean get found soon, before even worse harm befalls them!

I liked how you portrayed how Dave, Miss Miller and Simon's brothers and Jean's sisters miss Simon and Jean in their own way.

I was deeply moved at how Jean sang Simon to sleep, that was absolutely beautiful!

I hope the next chapter or so has the gang getting at least a clue as to where Simon and Jean are so that they are finally rescued before they are killed!

Update soon!

Loved the part about the rest of the family. Very-in-character, perfect grammar, and great word choice.

new chapter, yay! this was so cute! i loved it! UPDATE SOON!

This is so touching and a perfect example of an outstanding Simon/Jeanette fanfic, please update as soon as you can. I'll be waiting!

Oh my gosh this is so cute. I LOVE how your showing Simon taking care of Jeanette. This is an amazing story please continue.

Also I loved the part when Simon asked Jeanette if the men had touched her. This is a beautiful story and I love how innoncent the chipmunks are and how well you shoiw that. Bravo please update soon.

BTW Simon's cross necklace was a wonderful touch I can see it in my head.

Aww! Poor Jeanette! But a really sweet moment! Continue soon!