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| tinaa :D 2008-07-25 ch 17, anon. | abusethis story's amazing. :] & the songs you used really make this story come to life; |
| Ace101_aka_Jph@yahoo.com 2008-07-20 ch 34, anon. | abuseThis was a magnificent story... i think it portrayed the future misty and ash very very well :)... i loved this fic tbh makes me feel empty inside after a really good book and u read the end and go wow... now wat :) I loved the fact that u actually made it seem like they were living real lives instead of some fairytail land... makes the story O so much better... Once again amazin story woot!! Hope ya neva stop!! :) |
| Affinitive 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseOH DRAMA! I'm excited to read the rest of the story :D But one question, why are they in the Viridian Forest after 4 years, cause I thought they would [technically] done with the Indigo League in about a year. But anywho, great job! |
| elmo-doodle 2008-06-02 ch 13, | abuselol!! all that screaming at the end was hilarious!! this story is fab! i can see why it has so many reviews! |
| Shuutastic 2008-04-30 ch 34, | abuseWow. That was a great read. A true chick flick-type story to the end, mind you, but everything was so well written and plotted. I enjoyed each chapter thoroughly. Very nice job. I found myself chuckling almost every chapter with the little girly things that happened. Definitely a favorite. |
| Shuutastic 2008-04-29 ch 17, | abuse“Misty please don’t tell me you’re making soup a la Ash,” Brock begged. “No, I’m making Ash soup,” she told him. “That’s just as bad,” Brock cried. “Forget it Brock, can you just pass me that pepper?” she sighed. “Ash used to love pepper in his soup,” Brock sobbed. “I guessed that he still does.” “Not anymore, you cut him into little pieces and threw him into a stew pot.” Just at that moment Ash decided to walk out into the kitchen. “You’re alive,” Brock cried happily wrapping Ash in a hug. Ash gave Misty a sort of ‘what-the-hell’ look over Brocks shoulder. “Don’t ask,” she mouthed in response. “I thought I told you to lie down,” she said. _ Amazing. I usually don't review until the end of the story, but I have to tell you that was just great. The screaming from earlier as well. |
| 0x Emo Contestshipper x0 2008-04-25 ch 13, | abuse“What?” Melody asked. “Sabrina’s **?” The girls fell into a fit of giggles almost immediately. “No Ash,” Misty said as she stopped laughing. “What would you do if I . . . I mean somebody kissed Ash?” “It depends who,” Sabrina replied. “Ok,” Misty said searching her mind for the right words. “Hypothetically speaking lets say that Shannon kissed Ash.” “I ** slap that little ** all the back to the ** hole she ascended from,” Melody said angrily. my names shannon...wow i feel like a ** lol i love the story |
| aYa 2008-04-14 ch 4, anon. | abuseaHm, tHe sTorY iS jUst oK... hM iTs jUxt a liTTLe cOmpLicaTed... |
| aYa 2008-04-14 ch 4, anon. | abuseaHm.. i reaLLY sUpEr lIkEd tHe sTorY... bUt i jUxT waNt tO cLarIfY... iS iT reaLLy hApPenEd? bCauSe i reaLLY lIkEd it... jUzt waNNa kNow... |
| it's simply me 2008-04-13 ch 34, | abuseThis is by far the best fanfic you've ever written! You can probably tell that from all the reviews you've got. |
| AshxMisty 2008-03-27 ch 29, anon. | abuseWho was it? |
| AshxMisty 2008-03-26 ch 7, anon. | abuseSo far, I like this chapter(So Far...) |
| Steve 2008-03-21 ch 33, anon. | abuseGreat Story! I gotta say, I prefer the first ending, fit the story better. Lovely! |
| Steve 2008-03-20 ch 13, anon. | abuseIt's like, 1:30am or something, and I've been reading this story for a couple hours now, and Man! FINALLY! Oh, I'm so happy! Great Story! Steve |
| BroadwayBabe2010 2008-03-09 ch 34, anon. | abuseCOMPLEATLY AMAZING! I laughed I cried I squeed! I'm adding you as a fav. author that's how amazing this was. Oh and I loved the songs incorperated with in the story. My fav. was Something like You! |