Overall, good story. The first 3 chapters were best off the 9 though, in my humble opinion.

MTLBYAKY

Yeah, this chapter seemed to 'jump the shark' a bit. Still good, but not quite as 'drawing' as the first 3 chapters. Even if Caroline doesnt linger over her problems, this wasnt a typical problem, and her initial reaction and fear to what had taken place, I feel she would have needed more than a few days to get to this stage. And with the subject of rape, doesnt seem very plausible to me that she would be flirting and such with Richard.

Also, Richard and Caroline both have brown eyes, not blue or grey. Not nit-picking, just giving you a head's up.

Hope this review wasnt too harsh - I know harsh reviews upset me, when I get them.

MTLBYAKY

This is very well written. The story flows well, the dialog is very believable, and the gang is very much in character.

MTLBYAKY

Aw! Great story! It's hard to find really good Caroline stories and this is just great! Keep writing!

It's 4 am in the morning... I want to keep reading this amazing story... but if I say up any longer, I think my head may explode! I'll read it in the morning!

VERY-VERY good- Albeit *much* darker than most CitC *stuff* out in the world now.

Very believable characters- not at all hard to picture any of 'em (from the show) saying or doing any of that- and the stuff that was unbelievable received the appropriate response from the other characters.

Keep writing- *DEFINATELY*

This was the best 'Caroline' fanfic I've ever read. It had me on the edge of my seat! There was drama, humor, romance...it had it all! I really really enjoyed it and I hope you continue to write more!

Thanks for the great story!

I really liked your story. I liked that you delt with a real adult situation instead of just writing yet another sappy story with no actual plot to it.

Loved it especially the romance in the last few paragraphs :)

WONDERFUL ending to this story! I loved it! In the end, when Richard got butterflies in his stomach at seeing the key, so did I! It was a beautifully written story, and I certainly hope you'll write another one!

Also, join the CitC fanfic mailing list for sure! We all swap stories and stuff on there, and I think you'd fit in nicely! Just visit SincereAmore.com for more info!

Awwwwww! That was a wonderful ending. I only wish that really happened on the show, if it still existed. I'm going to miss the updates to this story...Huh-I think there's a pattern to good things ending too soon. ;o)Please keep writing.

augghhh! so good! :P thanx for updating-i needed that.

This chapter was fabulous! I loved it! And I know, life can get pretty pesky like that at times... just hurry hurry hurry with the final chapter! I'm dyin' here! They're almost together!

I completely agree with the below reviews. You really need to finish up this story. You've left us hanging for, like, ever... and this story is so incredible, we need a conclusion! Please post it very soon... I'm starting to lose faith in even checking this site. Your story was what kept me coming back... now don't let me down :o)

i have read this now like a hundered times, im sorry, but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE if you KNOW THE FEELING OF ANXIOUSNESS...finish it