One of the strong points of your storytelling is how you don't try to make things 'too perfect' in how they resolve, nor do you devolve to near-mindless grimderp. It'll be quite interesting to see what finally comes of Kuno.

While there are certainly a lot of things left open, you did a good job wrapping up the current arc. I'd consider offering to continue it myself, but I don't know anything about "Hero Games Champions" other than what you have in this story, so I don't think I could do it justice.

It's a real shame that the Tendos have to give up their home and dojo, but hopefully Ranma and Akane can eventually build and run a new dojo of their own in Hudson City.

I'm sad to see it end. I found it to be one of the better written Ranma in America stories, actually one of the better written Ranma stories.
Thank you for sharing your imagination, it is very much appreciated.

I wish I had the imagination to write or I would continue for you.

I burst out laughing when Kat asked Akane if she was his girlfriend. I laughed more when you described Stacy trying to control the laughing.

And I know it was not your favorite story, but maybe... If nothing else can you publish or send me an outline for a story, maybe I can try. A lot of people that I can written critiques for would probably love to critique me back (though except for one person, I think I have always told them, I would write if I could so I envy there willingness to try if criticizing and hopefully helping them with their technique).

Aw, I'm definately not happy to see this end, especially if you're not going to continue it. But at least Ranma and Akane are reunited, and the story is wrapped up. Ironically, while I can understand Nabiki not wanting to risk facing Kuno's insanity without Ranma to protect the family, the whole family disappearing is likely to send him off looking for them. But that's another story, I guess.

Thank you for a wonderful chapter.

Well, with everyone involved dead, Ryu has no one to tell about Ranma's secret, unless he chooses to track down some of their bosses. Which I don't see happening at this point. Given that he wasn't trying to kill Ranma (I was a bit suprised by that, guess he's got a bit of a good streak, just as in the canon) I'm guessing from now on he's going to want to track down "Cherub" himself. A new arch-rival for the duo, maybe, or even an on-again, off-again frenemy, like Bluejay?

Loved Ryu giggling about Cherub's name. It reminds me more of Taro constantly teasing Ranma about his curse, but gives his character a bit more depth.

Great story, thanks for sharing and keep up the great work!

Thank you for another good chapter.

Like I said, still enjoying.

I am very happy with what you did with Bluejay. She seems like a really decent person, she just want to live at a certain level. She will never really be one of the good guys but on the other hand she is definitely not one one of the bad guys. She kind of reminds of how a lot of the authors portrayed Catwoman in her comic.

So Kumon is in on the big secret. Let us hope he is willing to keep the secret even if he does want to hurt/maim/kill for his revenge.

Definately worth letting the Muse take over. I don't know if Bluejay DID know for sure what that would to do her - or the bad guys - but it still shows that it takes all kinds to be a hero.

Ranma's little bout of stupidity was unfortunate, but not unexpected, given Genma's death. So will Ryu be reporting that Cherub and Ranma are one and the same, or will he be surviving this little enounter? (I never liked him much in the canon, and I won't be unhappy if he dies here)

Still enjoying.

I am guessing this chapter covered maybe 5 minutes. Each of the primary characters involved was given there time and what they saw, Chrysanthemum, Dark Angel, Ranma, Kumon, Amado, the Yakuza, and Deborah. Not a lot to comment on.

great story are akane and ranma going to meet and are they together or not travealing a few thousand miles says they are.

Ah! I want more! Good story. Is this the first that doesnt present Genma as a complete ass? Kuno's still a creepy bastard though. Ug, i'm done with that guy already! ;)

A short but good chapter.