and what a nice dream , you woke a little too early tho...

Wow! Putting your dreams in writing...that's exactly what that is, dont deny! HAWT! I'm so proud *tears*

Holly mother of sexy Lautner! I was gasping all the way through! Imagining him like that was so BAD! He's 17! OMG but I want to have a go now! Well done dirty girl ;) You rock!

Is it hot in here? Thanks for those mental pictures. I'll be having some sweet dreams tonight!

Urgh you are too mean!

Making it all a dream!

You were just getting to the really juicy part of the rest of the evening! Such a tease!

But yes...you should write lemons non stop! D

and im sure Laura is holed up somewhere reading this fic over and over LOL!

damn only a dream! :)

Congrats girl! Really good first attempt where is my story? lol

Lol

I'm so proud of you Hun!

Love the ending, a fucking hot dream... *sigh*

I know Laura is really happy. Fuck I even imagined it was me (middle name laura) but with Robert (hahahaha)

can't wait to read you whore Bella story!

Nicely done, darlin'! First lemon? Would not have figured that, and am looking forward to your full story... excuse me, I believe I need a cold shower.

Oh boy.. reading this might give ME a dream tonight! haha. Sweet lemon. And hot. ;) It was quite descriptive.. so I'm sure you could continue writing without much trouble! Well done. :)

Ah, that was great,you had me in stitches. Not sure if its meant to be funny or not but I found it freaking hilarious.

I love that you have written every wolf girls ultimate wet dream.

Ive been trying to NOT think about Taylor in 'that' way but this just forced images into my head that can't be ignored! *groans* LOL

Hah! Tricky ending, you little minx. A damn dream! I know the genisis of this dream and that you changed the name to Laura. Why, oh why couldn't I have dreams like this!

Good job,H2B! Awesome description skills. I would love to see you do dialogue! I bet you would have fun with that. Maybe in your full ff?

Okay, off to bed for me with high hopes!

xoxoxo

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Hey hon,

loved it you had nothing to worry about that was one sexy hot as hell wet dream lol.

you should write a complete story on here you have the talent and you're description of the lemon was magical so no need to be nervous of Now What Chapter I on the other hand am very nervous about mine although I am not until chapter 29 I think I will prob be on maternity leave by the time mine comes around.

Keep writing I am waiting for chapter 1 of a whole stroy.

love you hon

XOXOXO

That story is awesome! Love it! Looking forward to read more from you! :)

Okay, It might have helped me if I had read the author's notes first-could have had a heart attack with H2B being all lemony with a certain dark-skinned alpha guy.

I enjoyed the short story-especially the lemony parts. Good job on this. Hope you write more. Seem to have a gift. Next time more on the tall, sparkly one, okay? With your personal experience that should be good.

Great story H2B! Makes me happy to read one for the Taylor/Jacob fans! :) Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more from you!

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