Hi! I'm new to your story but I am enjoying it immensely. I'm very happy you provided this POV. It opened my eyes a bit more to how amazing Edward really is and how I wish that I could have been in the mind of my first.

*Tear*

I am hurting for Edward

This is wonderful...it really is...I know that everything has a purpose, and there's a method to your madness...so I'll continue reading...

She's hurt him terribly. How do you walk back from such a cowardly blunder? Can't wait to see.

Violhaine

OMGGGGG this pissed me off way more than the original chap too! I just wanna hug him and slap the shit out of her. :( It was great to see his POV on all of this and see that he had feelings for her since her beer at the bar.

Thanks ;)

So glad I read this well after completing the entire fic. As a mother of two boys, I don't look forward to those first broken hearts. Miscommunication is a bitch. My chest is still tightened for Edward's confusion.

Oh how she has hurt him.

Poor Edward. I loved getting inside his head for this piece. And I forgot to say on the ch23 review, but I appreciate how you made it realistic and not good for Bella her first time.

nice job with EPOV, he is so sweet!

Awesome Addi!

Love it when I get a 2 for 1! (2 chapters essentially, from 1)

And what a great couple of chapters! Thanks! Keep going!

that was beautifully told. Poor E!

He is so sweet, loved his pov. thanks.

sniffle. Poor Edward. Loved his POV though. Great job bb :)

Poor, poor Edward! I'm pissed at Bella, but a part of my understands her fear. I hope he goes after her!

I am so happy to have found your story! I love the premise - I mean, who doesn't love the push and pull that is the blossoming love of our favorite characters. I can't get enough. And you are so masterful with the words you choose. You use many different words well. It makes the reading personal and fulfilling. Your lemons are perfect and more like reality than other fics I've read. Thank you for that.